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Look. Yeah...

I'm talking to you, conscious. Pay attention.
You see that tent.
That is where the reader, will be staying.
Let me tell you the story. It began like this...

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Swish!

The branches of the trees moved with the wind. The tent was undisturbed and motionless until a young teenager, opened the flap and walked out into the arising forest.

"Take care of the house while I'm gone Mom.",she said with glee.

Hello. My name is ___. I didn't always live in a tent. Since my mom passed away in May, I lived with my grandfather on my father's side. But... His house was being renovated and I couldn't stay with my friends. So...

I began living in a tent. Sure, it isn't the best life,but I won't let that bring me down.

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Sorry for disrupting you...
But this is the end of my prologue...
Here's a for riddle for all to ponder...
For I care to yonder...
Why is a raven like a writing desk?

Shall thee answer.....
I will hope thou proudest enjoyed this preview...

Ah...
The begging of my readers...
Music to my ears...
(I apologize for everything... Only when I think really hard and I am on full artist view... I get little... Crazy with my writing... The quote that I used was said by the Mad Hatter...)
Not as mad as I, yes?

:iconcommentplz:

No...
Seriously...
You should comment...
I took my entire...
Three hour marathon of reading AND watching Fruits Basket for this...

Here is the Charcacter Log: [link]

I am still adding to it.
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:iconneigma:
neigma Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Student General Artist
A raven isn't like a writting desk at all... and i want to read the story!
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:iconmoniposa:
Moniposa Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Because a raven is free and able to fly just like a writer's ideas :iconohjoyplz: Just a guess . . . . and OMIFLIPPPINGGODIT'SFRUITSBASKETANDHETALIACOMBINED~~~~~ Gahhh, so much love and feels :iconimcryingsomuchplz:
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SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks.
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:iconmoniposa:
Moniposa Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome~~~ :iconyayprussiaplz:
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:iconrikoxblackstar:
RikoxBlackstar Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsqueeeplz:

Riddle: I have no clue :I
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That is the hard riddle I chose....
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:iconrikoxblackstar:
RikoxBlackstar Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's something to do with Edgar Allen Poe, but I cant remember what....
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yep...
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:iconrikoxblackstar:
RikoxBlackstar Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HE WROTE ON THEM BOTH!!!



I cant believe I forgot it >_>
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol
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:icon00-ninja:
00-Ninja Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My favourite fandom right now, and the first manga I ever read combined?

MOAR. NOW.
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SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Okay.
I'll type it up and edit and review it while it is still in my notebook...
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:iconhandmade-stars:
HandMade-Stars Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Writer
Nobody knows.
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:iconhinata-34546:
Hinata-34546 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Artist
plz i beg you frau continue~
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:iconcookiesfromme:
CookiesFromMe Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Artist
IF THIS DOESN'T GET FREAKING CONTINUED I'MA.... :icongermanyflipplz:
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Don't worry...
I have the next chapter ready.
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CookiesFromMe Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Artist
Yay! :'D
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:iconariellehermes:
ArielleHermes Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmm.. ignore the end of my first comment, kay? ^^;
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That isn't creepy...
What I consider creepy is scary...
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:iconariellehermes:
ArielleHermes Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG FRUITS BASKET, HOLYPASTA!!!!!!

And that Raven - desk thing... thats from it too!! and theres no answer.. right???

So... Who's the boys genna be, huh? and.. are they genna be cursed?? WHAT IS GOING ON!!

Im totally stalking you now. ... Sorry if thats creepy. Im hyper... very hyper ^^;
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol...
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:iconspaklingdiamond:
SpaklingDiamond Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Poe both wrote on them, to answer the riddle.
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:iconhuge-anime-freak:
HUGE-Anime-Freak Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I'm Tohru! xD
~
Yay! Can't wait for more!!! xD
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:icontheawesomeone888:
TheAwesomeOne888 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
This is actually a really smart idea! XD
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well...
Thanks!
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:icontheawesomeone888:
TheAwesomeOne888 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Your welcome!
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:iconlikasashes:
LikasAshes Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This sounds like an interesting crossover. Can't wain for more. :D
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I actually am also excited.
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:iconkuromuchu:
KuromuChu Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh Fruits Basket X Hetalia Crossover...
I'm loving this!<3
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks...
And now...
I let my unusual side take over so I can write the next chapter...
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:iconkuromuchu:
KuromuChu Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!
Haha! :3
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SakuraWhitefang Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Student General Artist
In an interview with Lewis Carroll , he stated " Both can hold a note, but it is very flat". He said that the riddle was not supposed to have an answer originally .
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That is true...
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:iconlady-angelkitten:
Lady-Angelkitten Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No, it's because edgar allen poe wrote about one on the other.
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
That is true....
But what is true is not true...
Of course what is not true is also true...
My dear commenter...
Of course one is mad in their hearts...
And all the greatest are mad...
Of course...
This is my very... Unusual side that wrote this same thing...
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:iconlady-angelkitten:
Lady-Angelkitten Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're interesting.
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks!
Of course...
Everyone has a side like that...
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:iconlady-angelkitten:
Lady-Angelkitten Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!
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:iconmissnessarose:
MissNessarose Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Wow, this is definitely a different take on a Fruits Basket x Hetalia crossover! I started one myself, and am about to post the second part, but I'd love to see it done in a style like this. Can't wait for the next part!
~Nessa
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Well...
I couldn't sleep for four days because this idea was in my mind...
This thing was killing me...
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:iconmissnessarose:
MissNessarose Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
I know how that is, trust me! Some things you just have to write down because they won't go away. :D
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
They won't leave...
Even for years to come...
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:iconmissnessarose:
MissNessarose Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
It's alright, you're not alone. :heart:
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Sometimes...
Loneliness is the thing that kills...

And I am so pumped about the next chapter!
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MissNessarose Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
Yeah, lonliness does kill sometimes, but I often have tunes to make up for the loss of actual people.
You're pumped?
Really? ^///^ :heart: That makes meh happeh.
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:iconmyrnamaeve:
MyrnaMaeve Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
How should I know?
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
...
....
I haven't the slightest idea...
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:iconmyrnamaeve:
MyrnaMaeve Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^;
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:iconsouthurep:
SouthUrep Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
No...
Literally...
"I haven't the slightest idea."
Is the answer...
Seriously!
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:iconmyrnamaeve:
MyrnaMaeve Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh.
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